Let`s make a story...

[بنت جده]

hi guys how r u??.... hope everything is going like it should be... anyway i`m writing this topic cuz an idea just popped to my head... u remember that game which we played once in 7arat alraja??.... it was bout making up a story like one person writes the begining then stops at a point then the other one who comes after writes some part then stops and so on.... well i was hoping maybe we could play this game in english u know try to write stuff it might be fun and we could learn a lot of words from it... let`s just try ok... i`ll write the first part then the rest can try and finish..




Suzy had a real hard test...she was trying to study but she couldn`t concetrate cuz there was something on her mind...but she had to study... she can`t go to school without studying she had to stop thinking about.....


yalla please try and finish the idea...:)

[caramel1400]

Its a nice topic Bint Jeddah ...but we need others cooperation....

She had to stop thinking about her big
problem with her mother ( for example) . She went to the kitchen and made a cup of coffee. Then suddenly ,she heard a strange sound...........

come on girls & boys lets complete the story..........


with my wishes
caramel1400

[رانو]

Thanks for the creative idea, bint jeddah :) >> i appreciate your efforts ..

At first, she tried to ignore the sound.. and to convince herself that her imagination was playing tricks on her .. and she waited for the sound to disappear, but it didn't .. it was getting louder and louder ..
She then figured out that it was the sound of footsteps .. right beside the kitchen window ...

( go on :) ) >>

[بنت جده]

she got reaaaaaaal freaked.... she looked outta the window but no one was there... she was holding a cookie jar in her hands when suddenly...


p.s. if i have any spelling mistakes plz forgive me ok...

[بنت جده]

thankx for joining in...

[رانو]

when suddenly, the front door opened violently, and a dark figure appeared .. it was holding a shining object in its hand .. when she looked carefully .. she knew what that object was ..

it was ..

a knife !!

go on :D

[بنت جده]

at first she panicked and she didn`t know what to do.... then she threw the cookie jar which was on her hand on the persons face.... she heard him scream then she...


yalla ele ba3di lol

[رانو]

then .. she somehow realized that the man's scream was awfully familiar .. as she came closer to the man .. she found out that she had just made a horrible mistake ..

a mistake .. she was going to regret for life ..

the man on the floor ..

was ..

her brother !!!

(go on )

[بنت جده]

she started to cry cuz her brother was bleeding and he was lying soooo still on the floor she thought he was dead... she went to check if he still had a pluse when....



yalla rano i think no on is playing but me and u lol

[سعودي]

when when when when when when
:( القصه ملللللللللللخبطه :( , طيب انا راح اكمل بس مو من عند when


after that she phone 911
خخخخخخخخخخ ما ادري كيف تدخل بالموضوع :p

[رانو]

Thanks for joining in, s3oodi

anyways ..

A man picked up the phone and asked what was wrong, she then said that she had killed her brother .. the man was shocked and sent the police right away to see what the matter was.. the girl was too stressed and couldn't believe what had just happened .. the police tried to ask her questions, but she was in total disbelief.. in other words.. she was a total wreck .. so they decided they'd ask her later .. the important thing now was her brother ..

for her brother's luck, he wasn't dead .. he was just unconcious .. so the ambulance rushed to the house ..

(I'll let you take it from there:) )

[سعودي]

oh BintJedah i'm forget , thax for this nice topic :(

rrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaannoooooooooo :D
from where you copy this reply ? :eek
:
خخخخخ انا ما سويت شي عشان تشكريني
http://www.lili.cc/li3.net/gif/20020508/pipi.gif


:rolleyes: اممممم :( مافيا اكمل كملوا انتوا



سعـــــ (( :p )) ـــودي

[بنت جده]

and the girl was sooooooo embaressed she said to one of the guys from the ambulance lol i was just kidding my bro is okay lolololo...the guy got real mad and he said....

[رانو]

The man said that her brother was in a critical situation.. he would need many surgeries to repair his damaged face ..
Her parents said it was okay .. as long as it's not life-threatening ..
So her poor brother remained in the hospital for the following three months, but at last.. he was the closest he can get to his normal appearance ..

the story was long forgotten by then , and the girl got on with her life ..

[سعودي]

:rolleyes: طيب يا دبه , أنتِ كدا مو قفلتِ القصه !!



:p سعودي

[رانو]

لا ما نهيت القصة :) ..

لسا إنتو دحين اخترعوا مغامرة جديدة صارت مع البنت .. خلاص خربت وجه أخوها و سوى عمليات و مشي حاله ..

يالله ابدأ بقصة جديدة بنفس الشخصية :) ..

[بنت جده]

one day her brother came into her room while she was studying for a test <<<<<<<< poor girl her life is full of tests lol.... she was sitting on her bed daydreaming....her brother just stood there staring at her.....he was smiling.... then he started to make some choughing sounds to get her attention...then she....

p.s. as i always say forgive me for any spelling mistakes lol

[رانو]

She finally noticed his existence !! lol .. she was surprised, actually, that he was in her room ..
She asked him what he wanted from her .. he said he just wanted to check on her .. just to see how she was doing
" You are day dreaming, aren't you?"
said her brother
She tried to lose the subject at first, but there was no way out !! she just had to tell him the truth ..

she had to tell him who she was thinking about ..

so she gathered up all the courage she had .. and said:

[بنت جده]

she said: ummmmm... actully...e7m...hhhhh...
the brother: WHAT??... what`s wrong with u??.. cat got ur tounge <<<<<<< if that`s how it`s wrote lol...
suzy: mmmmmm... well.... i was thinking bout...( in her mind she`s saying : what am i gonna tell him...)...

yala ele ba3di...

[سعودي]

Turn the pointer, and comes days summer
She was unhappy, but now opposite, cos she was frightened for that she work hard , and thrive

:rolleyes: مدري كيف راح يتصرف دا الموضوع ,
بس اعتبروه زي الكلمات المتقاطعه :p

[بنت جده]

والله ضحكتني ياسعودي... بس كيف اكمل عليه دحين؟؟..

[رانو]

أنا أكمل يا بنت جده .. ههههه .. ولا يهمك .. خلاص اتعودت على أسلوب السعودي هادا :) ..

So after thinking long and hard, she found out that there was no way out of this.. she just had to tell him. What was going to happen if he knew ? Besides, he might even help her out .. or give her some useful tips .. she could really benefit from his wise opinion ..

So finally .. she opened her mouth .. and started: " .....

" Your turn :) "

[بنت جده]

she said : I........when her mother came into the room...

the mother: hi my darlings??...how are my beautiful kids today??

the bro: oh hi mom is dinner ready <<<<<<<<he only thinks bout his tummy..

the mom: yes sweety it is...

the boy: ok i`m going to eat...

then he left the mom and her daughter alone in the room...

the mother looked at her girl and said.....


now u finish lol

[رانو]

The mother said: you look awfully tired, dear.. is anything wrong?
The girl replied: No, everything is just fine.. I'm just worried about my test result ( as you said, her life is all tests .. lol !! ) so anyways.. her mom was convinced with her reply .. and told her to come down to have dinner on the table with the rest of the family ..

The girl really appreciated her mom's interruption to the conversation with her brother .. and she was glad that there was something to attract her thoughts a little from what was really worrying her ..

The idea of having dinner now .. was just great ..

She just hoped that the attraction would last as long as it could .. but she knew, that that didn't matter.. because no matter how long it did last.. it would eventually end.. and she would be back to her own circle of thoughts and worries again ..

They had macaroni and cheese for dinner .. :)

( Your turn ) :)

[بنت جده]

now i`m hungry lol



when they all sat on the table... they had a conversation about the test and how to study and stuff like that...then her brother .......we gotta give him a name lol....he looked at her again and said: suzy u look like there`s something bothering u cuz when i came into ur room u weren`t studying u were thinking bout some thing... tell us what is bothring u....
suzys mind : great why does he have to talk bout that NOW!!.....
her father: suzy honey what is wrong with u.... ur brother told me u weren`t consitrating on ur studying...
suzy: oh no nothings wrong with me dad..
her brother: sure there is..it`s written all over ur face..
suzy: excuse me... i`m finished with eating i`m going to my room...
she was really mad so she went up to her room and closed the door so hard....



yalla what will happen next??

[رانو]

Of course, what she did only made her parents more and more curious.. not to mention her brother ..who was practically dying to know what was bothering her ..
(and by the way, her brother's name is Randy ) :)
So Randy went up to Suzy's room again, and opened the door, and this time, he insisted on knowing what was wrong .. and swore that he wasn't leaving the room until she told him ..
So she said : OK OK .. I guess I have no choice, do I ?
He shook his head no ..

So she said :

( your turn :) )

[بنت جده]

yeah i think we should write it in a book and publish it lololo...



suzy: mmmmmm well....i.....i....hehehehehe
she started crying sooooooooo hard...
randy: ssssssh what is wrong??
suzy: look eh i don`t wanna talk bout it okay..it`s somthing personal and i don`t wanna talk bout it... now could u just get out of my room plz.... i wanna be alone!!<<<<<<<< she was crying and mad..
randy: ok ok i`m leaving u alone...but if wanna talk bout it i`ll be in my room..


yalla rano finish lol

[مرهف الإحساس]

أنا زي الأطرش في الزفة

لو تترجموا كلامكم كان أحسن

[رانو]

She cried continuously for about an hour. She then stopped, stared at her puffed eyes at the mirror, and asked herself: Is he worth it ? Is he worth all what I'm doing to myself? He just left me like that, without even thinking twice, or considering how I would take it.
Hadn't our times together had any effect on him? Is it possible that what I consider were the best moments in my life didn't mean anything to him?

She just couldn't stand it anymore.. she had to do something ..
Calling him and showing him how weak she was after he left her, wasn't a solution, obviously..

She needed support, she needed advice .. Not to mention, she needed someone beside her in this tough time ..

But who ??