I am back and I am better than ever

[RAVEN]

It has been a while but here I am. and I have some thing that I want to share with all of you

and it took time to make

so I hope you enjoy it:


I'm back
And better than ever
Got a knack
For making things better
Face facts
'Cause your opinion don't matter
This maniac
Is gonna step on whoever
They all talk
They say that I've lost it
But chop me down
And I swear it's gonna cost ya'
Now I'm back
The boss of you morons
To never count me out is one thing you can count on

[رانو]

I suggest you cut a deal with Eminem :D
You can write the words for his songs, and he'll sing them, and you'll divide the profits.. how's that for an idea ;) ??

To tell you the truth,
I think you are gifted..

But may I ask a question?
Why are your writings always angry?
It's as if you're screaming and yelling at the person reading them...
Are they addressed to somebody in particular?
Or you don't mean to address them to anybody at all ??

Best Regards,
rano

[RAVEN]

well rano

I liked your idea "cut a deal with Eminem " LOL

the feeling you see in the writing is my feeling, because I only write when I am angry , most of the time

and the wirting itself depends on what am I angry at? like in this one , I was angry about my supervisor not liking my way of teaching English

and thank you once again for posting a reply

[سعودي]

oh , welcome back RAVEN . :D

[رانو]

Well..
I do believe that people have certain circumstances under which they can write more creatively than at other situations..

You write beautifully when you are angry,
while in my case,
I write my best when I am studying ! lol >>
really .. that's a fact !! .. unfortunately, of course ..

Like now, it's my finals season ..
and I now thought of writing my first Arabic piece of work ! lol ..
I'm still working on it .. but it's really not the time, you know !

Anyways..
Are you really an English teacher ? whoa
I didn't know you were that old !

[RAVEN]

سعودي
thanx for the welcome

Rano

LOL , I am not that old , I am only 22 and I will turn 23 this coming July 7th

and I think what you said :
I do believe that people have certain circumstances under which they can write more creatively than at other situations

is true , because when I am not angry "mad" at someone or something I just don't feel like writing anything at all

and yes I am an English teacher , this is my 1st year in this business

[رانو]

A teacher, huh
May God be with you !

[بنت جده]

welcome back mad raven lol.... i really liked ur writing and as rano said it does sound like some kind of a rap song or something lol thanks for sharing it with us anyway and may god help u with the teaching...

[Free Mind]

whassup raven???
so angry.....thats made me like a ristle watcher!!
and imagine the rock or nash screaming those words hahahahahahahahah

but.....mmmm cut a deal with eminem ... think about it

i wanna getta deal with you all guys!!!!!

teskkerlar

[Free Mind]

whatta coool teacher !!!!


u r 22 like me and I'm still studin' " still rest in shit!"

hahahahaha

but I hope u teach me english again .....angry song u Know !!!

that kinda stuff !!!


thanks and tesekkerlar

[RAVEN]

بنت جده
thanx for the lovely words


Rano
hope you are BAD enough to be just like me, LOL
best of luck to ya

Free Mind
I like seeing someone enjoying one of my poems , even in that MAD way you are talking in,LOL

and , yep , I am an English Teacher 22 years old and all , and my birthday is coming up on July 7th

some day maybe you will be a Teacher and you will see how hard this job is